A collection of inspirations, examples, problems, and solutions from the work of Writing Assessment Services (www.writingassessment.com). The acronym WrAsSe is the name of a little fish that cleans other fish and keeps them healthy, as Writing Assessment Services can do for student writers. The rest of the blog name is an affectionate bid for a connection to the Inklings, C.S. Lewis's group of writing friends. Please join me to "wrestle" with the challenges of writing and teaching.
Sunday, April 5, 2015
"Firmament" -- A Poem
Saturday, April 19, 2014
An Easter Poem
Ash Wednesday I try,
Walking up for my smudge,
To sense You in the rite--
Sooty crumbles skittering down my nose.
Lenten day by Lenten day
I squint my eyes to see,
In mundane March,
The moments of penitent piety.
Good Friday I shut myself in,
Poring over the story,
Calling up devotion,
Cross-legged on the bed with the Word.
Good Friday noon I find a place
Where still ‘til three
The faithful gather—
Remembering those dark hours.
Have I conjured emotion,
Struck up sadness,
Practiced the presence
Until I feel what I know?
Easter morning I shiver in the dark
With the few faithful,
In this cemetery somewhere,
To re-enact the rising.
But all for naught.
Dust, surrender,
Solitude, sleepiness—
All these are but negations.
While You,
Who fill all in all,
Walk lively among us,
Pour riches down our throats.
You shine, break forth,
Uplift, surround,
Overflow, abide—
Bursting our wineskins in forceful joy.
And suddenly the ashes fly upward,
A gust of real life—
Privations and vigils
Swept up in Your dance.
©2014, Cindy Marsch
Sunday, June 16, 2013
A Silly Poem
George Grant posted on Facebook this evening a quote by G.K. Chesterton: "The poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese."
Well, I'm up for a challenge, even after being away for a long time! This is what I posted in reply to G.G.'s post:
A Cheesy Poem
I once buttered up a young miss
By saying her skin was like swiss.
I meant it was silky with cream--
"Holes" was all to her it could seem.
I tried and I tried to do better,
And I likened her hair to a cheddar.
"Greasy" was all that she knew,
So she left me bereft and so bleu.
No! Her hair was as lovely as she,
Not stinky and gooey like brie.
So now I'm a miserable fella,
Sitting here with my nice mozzarella.
Stumble and sputter and wheeze--
You just can't po-et about cheese!
--Cindy Marsch, 2013
Thursday, July 5, 2012
Great Moments in Teaching
"The kids carried the conversational load on that poem for ten minutes."
I love it when that happens!
She goes on to describe how what happened didn't really fit her lesson plans, that she was supervised that day and knew she'd be missing many of the stated objectives. But something important happened there.
If you teach, I hope you have the joy of many such moments, and if you learn, I hope you are part of a miracle such as Ms. Kerr describes. Aren't our best memories of our educations from moments like these?
Sunday, June 24, 2012
The Scrabble Poet
Use the tiles from a Scrabble game to create a poem. Mike Keith, in "Scrabble Tile Poem," did several stanzas of iambic pentameter, each using all 100 tiles. Now THAT is a challenge!
Can you think of other ways to play with these tiles?
Thanks to Abraham Piper's 22 Words for this piece.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
A Poem
Untitled
In Spring the Earth bends and melts toward the South,
Gathering the orb of sunrise in her left hand,
Then passing it along her breast, warming herself,
Until she lays it gently among the bare trees at dusk
And basks in the rosy glow chilled blue at the edge.
The days warm as she lifts her orb-passing hands higher and higher,
'Til over her head she brandishes fire,
Stretched to utmost peak,
Dazzling the fat green grown full all about her.
Her midsummer glory she cannot sustain,
But slowly limits the extent of her reach.
Day by dog day,
The sun's heat parches,
The dusty summer wearies.
Then, arms outstretched, she relinquishes her hold:
Drawn down toward heavy harvest,
The sun's blazes graze the trees.
Spent with the year, she lets go her hands,
And the dawn orb and dusk roll down to her feet.
Still, she waits, spent, chill,
Almost dead with the year.
But a freshet stirs, and calls her to listen.
And again she bends down, melting toward the South.
© Cindy Marsch
13 March 2007
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
The Theme of Death in British Literature
Way to go, Abs! :-)
Death is a great leveler: It takes a brilliant theologian and a trucker and lays them gently side by side in a quiet cemetery. It tenderly pries a man’s grand artifices of arrogance and conceit from his cold fingers, steals his monuments to himself from him, and shifts them together deep in the sands of a desert. In the end, no matter how hard a man tries to leave lasting mementoes of his existence for future generations, death takes him, the only man who had a personal interest in his affairs.
Monday, March 3, 2008
Christina Rossetti Comparison
Together these poems present a picture. The heart of a woman leaps up at the return of her lover. But the crowning experience is that of a soul rising from its ashes – a soul saved. However, while Rossetti places her faith in Jesus, in his death and resurrection, she also looks forward to his return. "A Birthday" could easily follow "A Better Resurrection" and become analogous to the return of Christ to his bride, the church – an event calling for all the splendor and celebration Rossetti can imagine. Or perhaps "A Birthday" does come before "A Better Resurrection". Perhaps Rossetti expresses, through this ordering, her ultimate faith and security in Jesus. Men may fail. Many a lover does not return. But Jesus died, rose, lives, and will return. He has, in life, already suffered, and as Rossetti suffers in life, as she feels loneliness, numbness, sickness of soul, she looks to the man who suffered in her place, and she choose[s] to suffer for him, clinging to his name.